Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.

A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. the Astroaut had a mission to go to the future in the milkey way so he set of to space when he fly out of space the Astroaut watches the stars spin around him.

So the Astroaut got sucked in the milkey way