Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, 13 October 2015
Wednesday, 23 September 2015
Ioane Nesian Performance Review
On Friday the 18th of Sept 2015 we had Assembly. When Assemble was omost finish we saw the Nesian Fusion performed at Pt England School Assembly at the stage all of the Perents and kids oso Techers saw them performed on the stage.
I liked when Rowana and Wele had Black T-Shart and change into White T-Shart and I liked when they spin the Ailao Stick fast and fast it lookes like the were ninja.
When the Nesian Fusion finish Mr Burt said that if you droped the Ailao dont be afraid to pick it up and he said this is the them NO TO FEAR!.
Thursday, 17 September 2015
Ioane Cross Country Recount
On monday pt england school and the parente and teachers were wating at the cote.
When woningtea was finish We had to go changed in to our house coalers in the toilet and when we were finished we had lunch and when lunch time was finished we had to line up outside of class.
When Mrs Nua got us to our lines and when we got in line our we had to wait for the year 4 to come to the finish line and when the year 4 were finished their race it was the year 5 trun and I was in the year 5 team when we line up we got ready to run Mr Brut
said ready set go and he clapped the wooden clapper and we start running.
all of us ran and some of us fall down on the muddy field I ran to the pol and there were some mud so I ran to the mud and I jumped on the mud and my feet was so muddy
and I ran outside of the school and it was really really muddy
I thought it was poo
so I ran away from the muddy field
and we have to run
and I was coming to the finish line and I came 5th to last.
Monday, 17 August 2015
Ioane Advice Column: Nine Lemons
this week we have been reading a story about a girl and her sister who made lemonade. But they feel bad when some boys won't pay for the lemonade. I have written an advice column to suggest what they should do next time. Hope you enjoy please leave a comment.
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Wednesday, 12 August 2015
Ioane If I had a million dollars
If I had million dollars to spened at Sylvia park I will visit kathmandu,Mcdonaolds and hoyts cinemafs .
At kathmandu I wood buy the Fleece Jacket, snow socks and a beanie so that I can be warm.
Next I will go to Mcdonalds I will buy 3 big mac, 3 chicken and 3 frozen cola it will be so yummy!.
Now I will go to hoyts with my family I will watch Ant man and fant 4 stic it will be so fun.
I will feel so good and super happy.
Monday, 10 August 2015
If I had a million dollars to spend at sylvia park
Here are my ideas for what I wood spend a million dollars
Tuesday, 16 June 2015
Where Am I?
Room 10 has been leaning about describing words. We got a partner and and an ipad. We took a photo each of us around the school. Then we made this presentation describing where we are. Can you guess?
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Tuesday, 9 June 2015
A letter to my Dad
| Walt: -make connections from texts to our own experiences -write a letter to a family member |
We have been reading a story called Summing up Dad. Dad writes a letter to the kids teaching them about measuring and instructing them how to make breakfast.
I wrote a letter to my dad about what I want be when I grow up. Please leave a comment.
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Thursday, 28 May 2015
Superbikes!
We have been reading a book called Superbikes! There was a man called John Britten and his bike was made with two other New Zealanders. Their bike was made out of Carbon fibre because it is light and goes fast. Their bike was in the Grand Prix.
I found out about the Suzuki GSX-R1000. Here is an ad I made to tell you about it.
Please leave a comment.
I found out about the Suzuki GSX-R1000. Here is an ad I made to tell you about it.
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Monday, 18 May 2015
Skateboard Design
In Reading we read a story called A Tyreful of Air. It was about John Dunlop who invented the first tyre with air inside it. This is my design to make a skateboard better.
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Tuesday, 12 May 2015
Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. the Astroaut had a mission to go to the future in the milkey way so he set of to space when he fly out of space the Astroaut watches the stars spin around him.
So the Astroaut got sucked in the milkey way
Monday, 23 February 2015
Use your WITS
Use your WITS means Walk away, Ignore, Talk about it and Seek help. If you use your WITS in your life it will keep you safe.
W means walk away. When somebody is being mean to you you have to walk away. One time when I was working a kid was talking so I walked away and they didn’t stop my learning anymore.
I ignore it. ignore someone don’t look at them and don’t listen to what they say. When my cousin keeps saying they are stronger than me I ignore them.
T talk about it.When someone was saying bad word and I told him to stop it and I said I like it and
then he stop and he went away.
S seek help. when I saw a boy hurt and then I helped him come up and I took him to the sicke buy
to get more better.
Use your WITS will help you be a nice person.
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